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Diary

16/01/2019

Today we had a practical lesson with the technician this morning. After that, I designed the slides for my pitch, which you can see below. I am happy with the slides, I think they are quite concise and to the point, there isn't too much writing which could bore people. There is a lot of pictures which have data on which the class can look at while I am expanding in more detail. When I get home from college I will rehearse my pitch which will mean tomorrow I won't have pauses where I think about what I might say. I want the class to be involved at the end as much as possible. 

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Pitch Evaluation - Diary 17.01.2019

I was happy with my pitch this time. You can tell I was nervous as my tutor stopped me and told me to slow down, I didn't even realize that I was going so quickly. I only had managed to rehearse once for this pitch, maybe if I had rehearsed more maybe this wouldn't have happened. I was happy with this pitch as there was lots of discussion at the end. There weren't any comments about my subject of choice being too wide which means my research would have been fairly direct towards my question. I think I could have probably added fewer stats to my pitch and more opinions which would have added to the discussion. I am glad that I didn't add a video because I don't think this would have added much value to the pitch and maybe would have turned viewers away.

Diary

21/01/2019

After completing my research portfolio I have uploaded my bibliography and have now begun creating my project proposal for this project. It outlines where my idea came from, what I am doing for my video essay; how long it will be, what content it will include etc. Also, how we will evaluate our project. At the bottom is a project table where we outline what we will be doing each week. Tomorrow I will be completing my script for this project, this will involve a draft script which I will get another member of the class and possibly a tutor to review and check to see what improvements they would make. I will also possibly record a run through on my phone just to see how much time each section uses up. 

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Proposal

Pre-Production Paper Work

Script

Equipment List

Shot List​

Budget

Treatment Sheet

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Proposal

Diary

22/01/2019

Today I had my 1-1 with my tutor to look at my proposal. The only thing I needed to change was to add a little bit about how the final evaluation would be used. After that, I began creating my script. As I went along I was finding the relating images that I would need for this project. Tomorrow I will finish the script and get it to peer assessed to see how I would be able to improve it.

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Equipment

List

Diary

23/01/2019

This morning we had a practical with the technician then I completed the Budget Breakdown and the Equipment list. This didn't take very long as I had done these many times before so it was a simple case of filling in the information with a little bit of research for the equipment prices. 

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Script

FINAL

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Diary

24/01/2019

This morning we watched a pitch from another member of the class. After this, I sat with Chloe and we completed the final draft of my script, Chloe helped me re-word sentences so that they would sound a lot better when read to the camera. After this, I completed the treatment sheet, which was fairly straight forward but it was the first one I have ever done. All I need to do now is complete the shot list which I will do at home this weekend.

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